Sunday, June 7, 2009

weird...

so I was bored around the house so I felt like writing a poem. Haven't done it in a while. Tell me what you think. I don't think i'm done with it yet. (just so you know. NONE of my poems rhyme. don't judge me!)

Lines
Should I feel complete with you?
Should I feel un-ease without you?
for me it's an impasse.
And forever it shall be.
In my life,
Parallel lines don't cross.
An impasse will never happen.
What if love was powerful enough,
To make parallel lines crossed.
My lines won't cross
Without you, my love.

as you see, i'm bored. not the best i've done.

1 comment:

  1. =) I like it. My favorite line is, "What if love was powerful enough, To make parallel lines crossed."
    And don't worry, my poetry doesn't rhyme, either. =)

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